Monday, June 8, 2015

My retell of a short movie

 Once there was a grumpy old man who did not like the noise in the village so he slammed the window shut in an angry mean angry way. About 10 seconds later the window slammed open and blew out the bright candle. He looked very scared so he got up from his chair and he tripped over his wooden old chair got his lantern and ran up the stairs as quick as a cheetah. So he saw a big huge  machine in front of him and looked all around the huge big machine then he ran up some more stairs and saw where the huge big old light was. It was not working so he lifted the big old light up and then he tripped over his tool box and it was broken. The look on his face it looked as if he was about to cry. Then a huge ship was coming and it was about to crash in to the lighthouse so he rushed as quickly as he could down the stairs and opened the door and the villages  came with there lanterns.
THE END!


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